On Wednesday October 23, 2013 the Brain Waves were visited by representatives from Congaree National Park. These visitors critiqued student drafts of mural designs, writings, and videos for a mural that is being constructed outside the 6th grade hallway as part of the Brain Waves Parents, We Shrunk Your Kids project.
Students: Click on "Comments." Then write a 20 word GIST summary that explains what you learned from your experience with our visitors from Congaree National Park. Be very specific! Don't just say they were nice, or they gave you good feedback.
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ReplyDeletevistors from Congaree National Park gave great advice.They said group was that I needed more educational scenes in our video
ReplyDeleteMy experience with the congaree ranger was amazing they told us are video was good just that references were off.
ReplyDeleteI learned what environment my plant is located, and where to put it on the mural (by the big pine tree).
ReplyDeleteVisitors from the Congaree National Park were completely honest and gave us specific critiques. They improved my drafts and work.
ReplyDeleteYesterday when the Congaree People came they told our group that our plant looks good but the flowers needed to be spaced out and the stem needed yo be skinnier so they gave us some good advice for our flowers for the mural
ReplyDeleteYesterday my team and I got really good feedback and one that was told was to pronounce the words correctly.
ReplyDeleteThe fedback they gave us was positive.Based on the picture we showed they said, we knew alot of details
ReplyDeleteMy experience with the congaree rangers was amazing they told us our rough drafts where good but was off some.
ReplyDeleteThe rangers had told us that we did a wonderful job but we needed a tree in the congaree park.
ReplyDeleteMy experience with the rangers were awesome. Ranger Lauren said that the flowers on the cardinal flower were done amazingly.
ReplyDeleteMy experience with the Congaree Rangers was great. My group performed our play and they loved it, also our storyboard.
ReplyDeleteThe Visitors from Congaree Park gave everyone some good advice for example,my group needs more explanation about seed dispersal !
ReplyDeleteThey told us that we needed a tree from the congaree national
ReplyDeletepark and that they would send us pictures.
The Congaree Park rangers said we needed to make it more realistic and make the ladies tresses flowers white on it
ReplyDeleteThe Congress they said that we did good but we should have more tree like the maple tree and other plant that have seed .
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